Friday, April 15, 2016

Tavian Paige



                                                Blessing by John Holyfield
                                         
https://docs.google.com/a/roanokecityschools.org/document/d/1NTOqkooLcdJIZJVeIjQss4xbqBS8IJvQcH6Ny5rnCkI/edit?usp=sharing       






2 comments:

  1. I like how you put the quote in your essay; however, I would have indented each paragraph and made sure all of my words were in the same font and size. I would also limit the amount of "yous" I put in my essay.

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  2. I like how you put things from the book into your essay. Although I would have used better word choice through out essay and make sure you have the correct font and size.

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