A place for us to share "what counts." INSTRUCTIONS: Click New Post in upper right hand corner. Type YOUR NAME in the Post field. Then, upload a painting (not a photograph) that reflects a theme of your writing. Include the title (italics) of the painting and the artist's name.To share the essay, go to your Google doc; click Share, and get the shareable link. Paste that in the large rectangle. Highlight and select "Link." DONE!
I love the picture you chose to go with your essay. I also liked how you used examples from the book. In the second paragraph look at the way you used do. In the second paragraph do not forget to capitalize names.In the 4th paragraph you do not need quotation marks around the book title. Also in the 4th paragraph you should check your spelling of Willy's name. Overall, I loved your essay.
I love the picture you chose to go with your essay. I also liked how you used examples from the book. In the second paragraph look at the way you used do. In the second paragraph do not forget to capitalize names.In the 4th paragraph you do not need quotation marks around the book title. Also in the 4th paragraph you should check your spelling of Willy's name. Overall, I loved your essay.
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