Friday, April 15, 2016

Kira Woodgett


The Singing Butler, by Jack Vettriano 


2 comments:

  1. I think your essay has very good topics in it.They make sense and you did good at typing it. I like how you mentioned a raisin in the sun in your essay you gave really good specific details about it.

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  2. You wrote a really good essay. I like how you kept your essay in present tense. You also stayed on topic throughout the whole essay and you related your essay to the book A Raisin In The Sun which made it more interesting. I also didn't see any spelling and grammar errors.

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